Date | 15/11/10 | 25/11/10 | 6.12.10 | ||
I meet my deadlines | 4 | 4 | 4 | ||
I set challenges and mini comps if things get boring | 2 | 4 | 3 | ||
I organise and keep track of my equipment. | 2 | 4 | 3 | ||
I need nobody to remind me to behave or get back to work. | 3 | 3 | 3 | ||
I keep my eye on the prize | 3 | 4 | 4 | ||
I always have work to carry on with. | 4 | 3 | 3 | ||
Total | 18/24 | 22/24 | 20/24 | ||
Self Reflection / Goals | i need to keep my desk and other things tidy at all times i meet my deadline | i meet my deadline but i need to find work to carry on with | i need to set more mini comps, but i still meet my deadlines. |
Thursday, December 9, 2010
assessment webs
Wednesday, December 1, 2010
Dialoge writing
“Robert look there’s a Goanna,” I called out .” Go get your camera.”
“Naaaahhhh it all run out,“ Robert said sadly back.
“Fine I’ll get mine,” I sighed annoyingly.
Athletics Writing
our first activity is high jump .
It's Luke , Jake and I ,and we have to jump a 1.9m to win the high jump.
i run steadly up to the bar, i jump, dam! my foot knocks it.
i nervously wait to see if anyone makes it Luke knocks it and so does Jake.
I'm on my second turn running up to the bar faster than before, I jump, I skim it, I make it,yes!
Jake and Luke both knock it Yay!!!!!!!! I won.
Tuesday, November 9, 2010
End Of Year Writing
Wednesday, November 3, 2010
speech S.A
Speeches
Written and Oral Language
We are learning to:
Present material, conveying meaning clearly and accurately
Write and speak, expressing personal viewpoints, sequencing ideas logically
Speech Topic:
| Self Assessment from video | Speech in front of class | |
Success Criteria: | |||
Speech Writing | |||
My speech followed the hamburger technique and was logically sequenced | yes | | |
The point I was making was easy to understand | yes | | |
My speech contained research | Yes | | |
My speech had voice and was interesting | no | | |
My speech was in my words | yes | | |
My big idea comes through strongly | yes | | |
Presentation | |||
I enunciated my words clearly | no | | |
Terminal consonants | | ||
Ts and ds in the middles of words | | ||
Swallowed my goobies first | | ||
Seperated my words | | ||
My voice was loud enough | 1/2 | | |
I learnt my speech off by heart | yes | | |
I used expression in my voice | no | | |
I used enough volume to be heard by all | yes | | |
I used eye-contact | yes | | |
My speech was not too fast, not too slow | yes | | |
My speech was between 2 and 3 minutes | no | | |
My presentation materials supported but didn’t repeat my words | NA
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Total: | 9 1/2 | |
Novice – 5 Apprentice – 6 Practitioner – 11 Expert – 14
Self Assessment after Video
Self Assessment after Speech
Sunday, October 31, 2010
Speech
The Tour De France is the most well known cycle race in the world. People have thought that many Tour De France winners have taken drugs. Some have been right and some have been absolutely wrong. Some of the following people are either people who have taken drugs or people who have been found guilty of taking drugs: Alberto Contador (a three time winner of the Tour De France was suspended after a positive drug test in the 2010 Tour), Floyd Landis is also another Tour De France winner who has taken drugs, he won the 2006 Tour, but his gold medal was stripped from him after he returned a positive drug test result. Many people have thought that Lance Armstrong (seven time winner of the Tour De France) has taken drugs, but he has never gone positive in a drug test. Marco Pantani won the Tour De France in 1998, but sadly died after taking too much cocaine in 2004. He was rated the best hill climber of all time. A year after he won the Tour he was disqualified after an unnatural result in a blood cell count test.
So if you become a cyclist, don't try to cheat because you will never get away with it.
Thursday, October 28, 2010
P.I S.A
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Monday, October 25, 2010
Sunday, October 17, 2010
Tuesday, October 12, 2010
Monday, October 11, 2010
Term 3 goal assesssment
what did i do well?FOCUSED!!!!!!!!!
what is my next learning step?stay focused
Tuesday, September 21, 2010
concert writing
Thursday, September 16, 2010
maths videos
what is my next learning step?not be nervos
what did i learn?to not be nervos
Wednesday, September 15, 2010
free writing
what did i learn? to do it neater
what is my next learning step?do it neater
Tuesday, September 14, 2010
stiches
what did i do well ? descriptive writing.
what is my next learning step?think what I'm going to write before i write it.
Sunday, September 12, 2010
my best vis lang
what did do well ?did a bold picture
what is my next learning step ?to colour the tittle brighter
Wednesday, September 1, 2010
Tuesday, August 31, 2010
Sunday, August 29, 2010
Thursday, August 26, 2010
fitness tests
what did i learn ?to go 100% on every thing
what did i do well?in the soccer juggles
what is my next learning step?to try and bet my score
Sunday, August 8, 2010
Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Contains pictures and steps
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour
Some interaction
Audience is attentive
Speech is clear
Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
A little information – some in my own words
Adults have done some of it for me
No interaction with the audience
No humour
Poor presentation
Few pictures
Novice
Reads the words on the PowerPoint or GlogClearly started at the last minute Hardly any info
Parents have done a lot of it for me
No pictures or steps
Copied straight off the internet
No humour
Not finished on time
Untidy presentation
Speech is not very clear
Monday, August 2, 2010
Wednesday, July 28, 2010
Tuesday, June 22, 2010
descriptive writing
what did i learn ?
My P.I assessment
Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Contains pictures and steps
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour
Some interaction
Audience is attentive
Speech is clear
Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
A little information – some in my own words
Adults have done some of it for me
No interaction with the audience
No humour
Poor presentation
Few pictures
Novice
Reads the words on the PowerPoint or GlogClearly started at the last minute Hardly any info
Parents have done a lot of it for me
No pictures or steps
Copied straight off the internet
No humour
Not finished on time
Untidy presentation
Speech is not very clear
P. I class feedback
I did the same thing and got same results great P.I tom harry chaz
i think that you did well in your speaking.It was very good but the idea of it was a bit strange.well done with your idea Alana &linda
Cool idea Thomas but next time speak more clearly and loudly, but great job anyway! Maddy and Zia
That was a interesting PI but we were sad that the eggs didn't turn purple at all but still we were intrested.Well done!!!!! Nat,Kelly and Britt
Cool PI Thomas But next time talk louder and tell us abit more info but anyway it was a cool PI. Lucy and Grace
Cool P.I thomas. it looked like the outside of the yolk had turned purple. Corbin,Alan
your pi was very interesting.i really enjoyed your PI and I really liked the idea of the egg shape. natalya and emma
Good P.I Thomas purple eggs would have been so cool its good that you didn't give up once you found out it didn't work and you should try and find out another way to make eggs purple Good job Thomas. Kate and Libby
sweet PI Thomas make sure those chooks liked that beetroot and we would just like to say you did awsome with your PI so congrats thomas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111 caelum and mike
cool and funny. aidan
great pi !!! ne Sara,Sophie,Hannah
good pi thomas i liked that you done something that you wanted to do kale
Monday, June 21, 2010
Sunday, June 20, 2010
Sunday, May 30, 2010
Monday, May 24, 2010
what is my next learning step ?
do more work
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