T.C has been a very encouraging teacher.
my best sports achievements this year are 3rd in the school cross country, second in the school duathlon and 6th in the inter school triathlon.
I have enjoyed the inter galactic trophy because it is very challenging and fun.
My best class achievements have been getting up to independence level three, hitting a golf ball further than T.C, not getting a no for ages and getting golds for all my animal inquiry activities.
I have liked Market Day because I get lots of yummy food and snidges.
I am looking forward to the holidays but I also hope I am in T.C's class next year.
nice job for this piece you had lots of what you felt like and what you liked but next time add some similes but apart from that nice.
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