Its a super sunny day ,even better its athletics day.
our first activity is high jump .
It's Luke , Jake and I ,and we have to jump a 1.9m to win the high jump.
i run steadly up to the bar, i jump, dam! my foot knocks it.
i nervously wait to see if anyone makes it Luke knocks it and so does Jake.
I'm on my second turn running up to the bar faster than before, I jump, I skim it, I make it,yes!
Jake and Luke both knock it Yay!!!!!!!! I won.
nice writing a liked how you made it interesting by telling us that you made it over the bar and that know one else made it but next time change the lower case I's and change them to capitals but apart from that great.
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