Good job Thomas I liked how you explained how you got all your information and that you told us that youn went to massey for your information but next time you could have made the font and the colour of the font diffrent so we could read it but apart from that great job. Sophie,Sara,Ana,Maddi
You spoke clearly Thomas, but there is probably not enough in this to make a full investigation. You usually put a lot of your personality and time into your investigations.
well done thomas you spoke very clear and you choose a topic so everyone would know about you. next time put more pictures and dont make the background to dark because we couldnt see the writing that well other than that it was good -natalya
That was a great PI Thomas. You had lots of information and we can tell you put it in your own words but next time you should put more pictures on and not so much info on one page! -Hannah and Caitlin
I now know all the different measuring machines!
ReplyDeleteNext time maybe have more pics and give us more time to look at the measurements
Jaime
Good P.I Tom
ReplyDeleteCool that you really worked hard on it
Next time you could work on kowning it off by heart
From Annaleise
Great P.I Thomas!
ReplyDeleteYou spoke loud and clear nex time let all of us read all of it and longer and make the colued writing more seeable!
Alana And Linda
nice p.i I liked how you picked a different topic next time you could speek a bit louder
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Good job Thomas I liked how you explained how you got all your information and that you told us that youn went to massey for your information but next time you could have made the font and the colour of the font diffrent so we could read it but apart from that great job.
ReplyDeleteSophie,Sara,Ana,Maddi
great P.I. even though I didn'nt get to see it but I'm sure everyone liked it. you could have put more pic on but it was great.
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Also make the background a different colour
ReplyDeleteJaime
You spoke clearly Thomas, but there is probably not enough in this to make a full investigation. You usually put a lot of your personality and time into your investigations.
ReplyDeletewell done thomas you spoke very clear and you choose a topic so everyone would know about you. next time put more pictures and dont make the background to dark because we couldnt see the writing that well
ReplyDeleteother than that it was good
-natalya
good pi thomas but you need to know your words a bit better
ReplyDeletehim thomas your p.i. was mean
ReplyDeleteyou were good on you voice and info on your p.i.
that p.i. wast of bean hard to do.
you need to work on letting as to see the work on the power point.
from thor kenyon
Great P.I Thomas your spoke clear and loud
ReplyDeleteNext time give more eye contact
From Rebecca and Cindy
That was a great PI Thomas. You had lots of information and we can tell you put it in your own words but next time you should put more pictures on and not so much info on one page!
ReplyDelete-Hannah and Caitlin